Tourism’s influence on local economies in small towns has become an increasingly common topic in IELTS Writing Task 2. Based on analysis of past exam questions, this theme appears in approximately 15% of tests, particularly in questions about economic development and environmental impact. Let’s examine a recent exam question that typifies this topic.
Analyzing the Question
Some people believe that tourism brings economic benefits to small towns. Others argue that it creates more problems than advantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
This question requires candidates to explore both positive and negative economic impacts of the impact of tourism on local economies in small towns while presenting a balanced argument.
Economic impact of tourism on small town local businesses
Sample Essay 1 (Band 8.0)
Tourism’s influence on small towns’ economies is a contentious issue that merits careful consideration. While some argue that tourist activities generate substantial economic benefits, others contend that the drawbacks outweigh any advantages.
Tourism undeniably brings significant economic opportunities to small communities. Local businesses, particularly those in hospitality and retail sectors, often experience increased revenue during tourist seasons. For instance, many small towns in Thailand have transformed their traditional markets into vibrant tourist attractions, creating employment opportunities and boosting local income. Additionally, the impact of tourism on local infrastructure often leads to improved facilities that benefit both visitors and residents.
However, tourism can also create economic challenges. The seasonal nature of tourism often results in unstable employment patterns, with businesses struggling during off-peak periods. Moreover, increased tourism can lead to inflation, making basic necessities more expensive for local residents. This phenomenon is particularly evident in popular tourist destinations where impact of globalization on local food cultures has led to rising food prices.
In my opinion, while tourism can present challenges, its economic benefits generally outweigh the drawbacks when properly managed. Local authorities can implement regulations to protect residents’ interests while maximizing tourism’s positive impact on the community.
Sample Essay 2 (Band 6.5)
Many people have different opinions about tourism in small towns. Some think it is good for the economy, but others say it causes problems.
Tourism helps small towns make more money. When tourists come, they spend money in local hotels and restaurants. This creates jobs for local people. For example, in my hometown, many young people can work in new hotels and shops that opened for tourists. Also, the government often builds better roads and facilities when tourism grows.
But tourism can also make problems. Sometimes prices go up because tourists can pay more money than local people. Houses become more expensive, and food costs more. Also, many jobs in tourism only last for a few months each year.
I think tourism is mostly good for small towns, but the government needs to make good rules. They should help local people deal with problems like high prices while getting benefits from tourism.
Scoring Analysis
Band 8.0 Essay Analysis:
- Task Response: Fully addresses all parts of the task with well-developed arguments
- Coherence and Cohesion: Clear progression throughout with effective use of cohesive devices
- Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary used naturally and precisely
- Grammatical Range: Complex structures used accurately
Band 6.5 Essay Analysis:
- Task Response: Addresses main points but with less detail
- Coherence and Cohesion: Basic organization with simple linking
- Lexical Resource: Adequate vocabulary but less sophisticated
- Grammatical Range: Mix of simple and complex structures with some errors
Key Vocabulary
- contentious (adj) /kənˈtenʃəs/ – causing disagreement or debate
- undeniably (adv) /ˌʌndɪˈnaɪəbli/ – certainly true; cannot be denied
- hospitality (n) /ˌhɒspɪˈtæləti/ – the business of entertaining guests
- seasonal (adj) /ˈsiːzənl/ – occurring at particular times of the year
- inflation (n) /ɪnˈfleɪʃn/ – general increase in prices
- infrastructure (n) /ˈɪnfrəstrʌktʃə/ – basic physical systems of a place
To practice further, try writing your own essay about how tourism contributes to global economic development. Share your response in the comments for feedback and discussion with other learners.
