The topic “The impact of renewable energy on traditional energy markets” has been increasingly relevant in IELTS Writing Task 2. As the world shifts towards sustainable energy solutions, understanding this impact is crucial not only for examination purposes but also for real-world applications. In this session, we will create 1 to 3 sample questions related to this topic, choose one to write a complete essay, analyze it, and offer essential tips on vocabulary and grammar.
Sample Questions:
- Traditional energy markets are being disrupted by the growth of renewable energy. Do you think this disruption is beneficial or harmful?
- The rise of renewable energy has significant effects on traditional energy industries. Discuss the positive and negative impacts.
- Increasing the use of renewable energy sources has led to a decline in conventional energy industries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Selecting a Topic
We will select the first question for our sample essay:
Traditional energy markets are being disrupted by the growth of renewable energy. Do you think this disruption is beneficial or harmful?
Analyzing the Topic
In this topic, the keywords are:
- Impact of renewable energy
- Traditional energy markets
- Disruption
- Beneficial or harmful
We need to provide an analysis of how renewable energy affects traditional energy markets and argue whether this disruption brings more benefits or causes more harm.
Writing the Sample Essay
Introduction:
The ascendance of renewable energy sources like solar, wind, and hydroelectric power has significantly disrupted traditional energy markets reliant on fossil fuels. This shift raises the question: is the disruption engendering a predominantly positive or negative outcome? This essay will examine the various impacts of renewable energy on conventional energy industries and argue that the overall effect is beneficial.
Body Paragraph 1:
Economic Impacts on Traditional Energy Markets
Firstly, the traditional energy markets are experiencing economic strain as renewable energy technologies become more cost-effective and widely adopted. Coal and oil industries have seen a decrease in demand, leading to job losses and a downturn in economic contributions from these sectors. For instance, the U.S. coal industry has faced significant layoffs and mine closures. However, this economic shift is a necessary step toward fostering a more sustainable and resilient energy economy in the long term.
Body Paragraph 2:
Environmental Benefits and Energy Security
Moreover, renewable energy sources offer substantial environmental benefits, mitigating the adverse effects of fossil fuel consumption such as air pollution and greenhouse gas emissions. By decreasing the reliance on traditional energy sources, countries can enhance their energy security. Renewables are often locally sourced and are less susceptible to geopolitical tensions which frequently affect oil and gas markets. For example, wind and solar energy reduce dependence on imports and stabilize energy prices, contributing to national energy security.
renewable energy vs fossil fuels
Body Paragraph 3:
Innovation and Job Creation in the Green Economy
In addition, the shift towards renewable energy fosters innovation and has already resulted in burgeoning job markets in new technology sectors. Jobs in the renewable energy sector, such as those in solar panel installation and wind turbine maintenance, are growing rapidly. According to the International Renewable Energy Agency (IRENA), renewable energy jobs worldwide reached 11.5 million in 2019. Thus, while traditional energy sectors may decline, the potential for economic growth through innovative technologies offers a promising future.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, while the disruption caused by the rise of renewable energy has indeed challenged traditional energy markets, the overall consequences are predominantly positive. The economic shifts encourage innovation, the environmental benefits contribute to a healthier planet, and energy security is bolstered through diversified energy sources. As such, the transition towards renewable energy, despite its challenges, is beneficial for a sustainable future.
Word Count: 340 words
Key Considerations when Writing
- Vocabulary Usage: Use specific terminology like “mitigating”, “geopolitical tensions”, and “energy security” to enhance the essay’s academic tone.
- Grammar Structures: Employ a variety of sentence structures, including complex and compound sentences, for a richer and more engaging text.
- Coherence and Cohesion: Ensure each paragraph logically follows the preceding ones and contributes to the overall argument.
Vocabulary to Remember
- Ascendance (noun) /əˈsændəns/: the rise to a position of power.
- Mitigating (verb) /ˈmɪtɪɡeɪtɪŋ/: making less severe, serious, or painful.
- Geopolitical (adjective) /ˌdʒiːoʊpəˈlɪtɪkəl/: relating to politics, especially international relations, as influenced by geographical factors.
- Resilient (adjective) /rɪˈzɪljənt/: able to withstand or recover quickly from difficult conditions.
- Burdening (verb) /ˈbɜrdnɪŋ/: causing someone to have trouble, worry, or hard work.
Conclusion
In summary, understanding the impact of renewable energy on traditional energy markets can offer valuable insights for IELTS Writing Task 2. Furthermore, it broadens one’s comprehension of global energy dynamics. Practicing on diverse questions within this topic allows candidates to approach the examination confidently. For additional practice, consider how renewable energy impacts national security here.
Practice Questions
- How has the adoption of renewable energy affected global energy prices?
- What challenges do countries face in transitioning from traditional to renewable energy sources?
By focusing on these questions and integrating the tips provided, candidates can enhance their writing skills and increase their chances of achieving a high IELTS band score.